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the mad mare
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« on: May 05, 2007, 06:21:52 AM »

I'm pretty up with technology and am getting good at sending text messages to the kids from my mobile phone (they think it's hilarious that I spell things correctly).  BUT one of the kids decided to help Dad out and change his mobile phone setting to predictive text, which, as its name suggests, predicts what is being typed, or should I say TRIES to predict what's being typed.  He sent me a message that read "tv google rotten eggs" or something like that!




Texting Clancy

With no time to send a letter, I had found a way much better
to send an subtle message to my hubbie’s mobile phone.
“It’s my birthday dear” would do him, so I SMS’d this to him,
but the kids had set predictive text, and Clancy hadn’t known.

And a message came directed, in some words quite unexpected –
and I decided there and then, that that night he’d get skinned!
Was he drinking when he wrote it?  So verbatim I will quote it:
“I gore wot hate a loudly fax, ill buz wot floydss cof wind”

In my wild erratic fancy, visions came to me of Clancy -
on a barstool “down the Cooper” where the useless husbands go.
With my temper fairly stringing, Clancy wandered home then, singing,
naïve about his message - Clancy clearly didn’t know.

He brought gifts, so I excused him, but my anger still confused him,
til I showed the stupid message on that mobile phone of mine.
Once he’d told me what he'd written, I was purring like a kitten -
“I hope you have a lovely day, I’ll buy you flowers and wine.”

So be careful SMS’ing, or your partner will be stressing
if the message sent, gets altered as it flies through outer space.
My children think I’m senile, since I chucked that stupid mobile
‘cos texting’s just plain dumb – I’ll stick to talking face to face! Tongue







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« Reply #1 on: May 05, 2007, 06:32:43 AM »

Hey Hey Kym!!

Loved it. Rhythm & rhyme perfect and the sentiment is spot on.

Cheers

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« Reply #2 on: May 05, 2007, 11:52:20 AM »

Ummm,...............I don't even know how to text  Embarrassed
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« Reply #3 on: May 05, 2007, 03:56:37 PM »

Great poem Kym!!!
I'm like you - I like to spell things correctly, although I am finding that I am getting used to shortening some things - like u (you) and r(are) etc, but hate abbreviating words so the recipient has to guess what you are talking about.

Just a word of warning - you also have to be careful you send your SMSs to the correct number!!! I received a SMS one day which was very obviously from a young guy to his girlfriend. Hmmmm...... Long time since I've been called what he called her  Shocked  Shocked (ok!! Probably never have!!!  Roll Eyes Roll Eyes )
Poor bloke was a tad embarrassed when I replied, suggesting he might like to check the number he was sending it to!!!!  Grin Grin

Ross,
Seems like you are spending too much time out in the lonely outreachs of this country, and not enough time catching up on the marvels of technology!!!!!  Grin Wink

Catchya
Irene



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