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Bernard de Silva
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« on: May 25, 2007, 06:14:11 PM »

“Cast Petals Softly Fall”.

They fall, as tears of sorrow,
the petals cast into the grave.
Like to dreams of tomorrow,
fragile pieces none may save.

Lingering a sweet fragrance,
lost in passage to the ground.
Sad petals in a dark expanse,
fall to earth with not a sound.

None to feel their soft caress,
save fresh turned earthy clay.
A coverlet, finality to express,
the petals lie there in disarray.

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« Reply #1 on: May 26, 2007, 12:27:36 AM »

Bernie, that's heartfelt mate. My wife and I shed a tear when we read that.
Still praying for you.

Tom.

3rd line, first stanza - 'the' rather than 'to' ?
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« Reply #2 on: May 26, 2007, 01:55:00 AM »

It's perfect Bernie, just perfect.

M.
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« Reply #3 on: May 26, 2007, 07:40:10 AM »

  Let the tears fall with no shame
Even when a simple thing brings forth a name James
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