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SergoA

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s.p. "I'm not looking..."

« on: July 14, 2008, 12:37:08 PM »

I'm not looking for fairness.
When I'm making for destiny faces,
In response it uses its maces!


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zondrae

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Re: s.p. "I'm not looking..."

« Reply #1 on: July 14, 2008, 03:21:10 PM »

Hi Serg,

May I suggest you might receive more comments on your work if the poems were a little longer. It is difficult to find something to say about just 3 lines.
Most of the members of this site are into Australian verse that has both rhyme and metre. As English is not your first language it will be more difficult for you than other site members to write in this style.
I know I am not the only one who likes to read many styles of poems, so please keep posting your writing. You can see by the number of 'views' that your poems are being read.


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