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Bernard de Silva
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« on: March 16, 2009, 11:26:13 AM »
"OBELISK"

Obelisk, while you stand, you are magnificence,
Unblemished, rampantly phallic, and inspiring.
Fallen, the obelisk fragments into insignificance,
Mere rubble, base residue …pilgrim, such is life.

©. Copyright: Bernard de Silva.
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« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2009, 05:45:48 PM »
Hello Bernard!
The one word only I have to say: Bravo!
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« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2009, 07:31:48 PM »
aw, not asterix or dogmatix to keep him company?  lol

short and sweet and good poem bernie
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« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2009, 01:50:08 AM »
morning Bernard,

Oh no, not politics at this hour of the day!

(or is it football players you had in mind?)
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« Reply #4 on: March 17, 2009, 06:32:00 AM »
G'day Zondrae,
                  no, unfortunately, it's perhaps most akin to
a casual analysis of any major world economy and its more
than likely immediate trajectory...
                                            Bernie...
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« Reply #5 on: March 17, 2009, 08:13:32 AM »
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'A Woman of Words'  ...... Zondrae
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