Australian Bushverse Forum

Australian Bush Poetry, Verse & Music Forum

For more than 180 pages of Australian Bush Verse and Music visit the main site at Australian Bush Verse & Music

REGISTRATION TO THIS FORUM REQUIRES ADMIN APPROVAL


May 23, 2012, 03:06:53 AM *
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length

Bushsong Web Design Bendigo
News: Thanks for supporting the Forum. This is what builds a community of bush poets and bush poetry lovers across the world.
 
   Home   Help Search Calendar Login Register  
Pages: [1]
  Print  
Author Topic: "... the former stars." (language)  (Read 332 times)
SergoA
Super Member
***
Offline Offline

Posts: 454


View Profile
« on: November 22, 2009, 01:31:56 PM »

People, they are the former stars.
That tired once to shine and fly
Alone in the cold sky.
Came here, for a while.

It's now not surprisingly for me
When I meet a descendant
Of a terrible "black hole".
The scale is not the same.
That's why this one is
A usual "_ _ _  hole."
« Last Edit: November 22, 2009, 04:02:00 PM by SergoA » Logged
Terry
Super Member
***
Offline Offline

Posts: 552


View Profile
« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2009, 02:58:29 PM »

Hi SergoA..
I reckon I've met a few of those last ones you mentioned.

Cheers Terry

Logged
SergoA
Super Member
***
Offline Offline

Posts: 454


View Profile
« Reply #2 on: November 22, 2009, 05:59:13 PM »

Hi, Terry!
Yes, they are not going to become extinct, alas.
SergoA.
Logged
coralie
Super Member
***
Offline Offline

Posts: 725


View Profile
« Reply #3 on: November 24, 2009, 01:47:16 AM »

Good poem Sergo. We have a saying here in Australia " As common as A--holes" No they just don't ever go away Roll Eyes Roll Eyes    Coralie
Logged

The reckless mare..
Pages: [1]
  Print  
 
Jump to:  

Powered by MySQL Powered by PHP Powered by SMF 1.1.11 | SMF © 2006-2009, Simple Machines LLC Valid XHTML 1.0! Valid CSS!