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SergoA
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« on: March 11, 2010, 09:25:23 PM »



The very distant shore
Is yesterday.
But once I'll sail up there.
Once and forever.
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« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2010, 05:02:24 AM »

Interesting Sergo...was your intention that the far and distant shore is where we head to after death and that our final journey makes it our  final destination 'forever' ??

I am just curious...we all have different takes on other peoples work and sometimes what they write about is not what their words depict to us.

I liked this though, thank you for sharing

Cheers

Maureen
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To the home of a friend the way is never long
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« Reply #2 on: March 14, 2010, 10:41:46 AM »

Yesterday certainly is a very distant shore, once we have sailed on. Can't find our way back to revisit that place. It has to remain a memory.   I like this, Sergo.
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« Reply #3 on: March 14, 2010, 11:38:03 AM »

Hello, dear ladies!
Thanks for reading and interesting comments!
Yes, the yesterday is "the very distant shore" and one can reach it only after one will die. At least this is my vision that "after death" there is yesterday only. Though I know there are different points of view.
Best regards, Sergo.
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